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Five Writers Explore the Question: “What
Exactly is Creative Nonfiction?”
Context: At the opening to the academic year 2006, writer and
teacher Karen McElmurray asked five writers to contribute their
thoughts regarding creative nonfiction for an informal e-mail exchange.
How would they define the genre? What qualities are present in
the best nonfiction pieces? Here are the responses she received
in our roundtable e-mail exchange. The writers who contributed
are Greg Bottoms, Patricia
Foster, Rebecca McClanahan, Dinty
Moore,
and Sue William Silverman,
Dinty Moore:
SHORT
ANSWER: Creative nonfiction focuses on this human desire to tell – and
be told – compelling stories. The term nonfiction means that
real people, actual events, genuine places, and the author’s
authentic thoughts and observations are being described. The word
creative relates to the method of storytelling – a careful
and skillful application of literary techniques.
RIDICULOUSLY LONG ANSWER (excerpted
from my textbook, THE TRUTH OF THE MATTER):
Creative nonfiction
focuses on this human desire to tell – and
be told – compelling stories. The term nonfiction means that
real people, actual events, genuine places, and the author’s
authentic thoughts and observations are being described. The word
creative relates to the method of storytelling – a careful
and skillful application of literary techniques. Though
creative nonfiction writers employ considerable imagination in
shaping the form of what is being written, in choosing the right
words and sharpest metaphors, and in deciding which elements of
a story best reveal the significance of a situation, the facts
presented by the writer are not imaginary or invented. They
are true.
Of course, since much of what is classified
as creative nonfiction falls under the memoir category – past events examined through
a present lens – questions as to whether absolute accuracy
is even possible are inevitable. Authors of memoir are almost
always required to utilize “remembered” dialogue and
details, yet scientific studies show that memory is never as reliable
as we would like to think. Certain details slip away over time,
while others become polished in our minds until they shine a bit
brighter than the reality. Each author of creative nonfiction struggles
with this problem of memory and accuracy, and there are no hard
and fast rules. Readers understand this, and for the most part
simply expect that you are doing your best to remember accurately
(and where possible, perhaps you have checked with others who were
there to see what you have missed.) Though you may not remember
your mother’s exact words to you as you walked into the orthodontist’s
office in eighth grade, chances are pretty good that you remember
your mother’s usual speech patterns, the expressions she
tended to use, and the general idea of what she was trying to tell
you. If you combine these elements to portray an honest representation
of that conversation, most writers and readers would agree that
you have played fairly with memory, even if your version is not
a “court transcript.”
A helpful way to approach the question of
memory in creative nonfiction is to occasionally investigate
your own motives. Are you remembering something a certain way
in order to make yourself look more like the hero of the situation,
or in order to cast your lazy brother-in-law in an even more
unpleasant light? If so, you are being dishonest. Moreover, you
will probably find that the less straightforward, more complex
truth, where you are not “all good” and
your brother-in-law is not “all bad,” makes for a richer,
more interesting story. If, however, you can look yourself
in the mirror (and your reader in the eye) and say “This
is my honest memory, and though my recollection certainly isn't
perfect, I've done my absolute best to get it right,” you've
done your job, even if in the end the color of your sister’s
dress was yellow not blue on that summer day twelve years in the
past.
Questions of what constitutes truth in nonfiction
go beyond just memoir. Even if the nonfiction account you are
writing concerns an event which occurred only two days before,
and you took painstaking notes, the fact remains that we human
beings can observe events right before our eyes and still overlook
key details. Moreover, once we decide to write our account of
the event, we are making the decision where to “point the camera,” what moments
to stress and which to pass over because they are unimportant. The
fact that creative nonfiction offers one author’s view of
the story is a strength of the genre, not a weakness or a disadvantage.
In shaping the story, finding the proper starting point and ending
point, and choosing which moments or ideas are important for you
to emphasize, you are invariably presenting one version of the
truth–your version. Make your version as honest, and interesting,
as you possibly can.
Rebecca McClanahan:
Literary
nonfiction (see *note below) is nonfiction that aspires to the
condition of art. This aspiration may reveal itself in many ways--in
close attention to language, for instance, or in an elegant,
original structure, or in a well-paced narrative or in a surprising
voice or in a new, unusual take on an old subject. Literary nonfiction
uses the materials of the ordinary world in extraordinary ways.
It pays attention and attempts to find what one of Henry James's
characters calls the "the
figure in the carpet," the design that is woven into even
the most everyday events. It notices collisions and intersections,
and uses these as opportunities into the deeper story, holding
as its highest task what Faulkner called, in his Nobel acceptance
speech, the search for "the human heart in conflict with itself." This
conflict of heart, this place where the nonfiction writer is divided--intellectually,
perhaps, or emotionally--is the center of nonfiction writing, even
if the writer herself is only the "eye" that is present,
peripherally, rather than the "I" at the center of the
storm.
I like Dinty's definition very much and
agree with it, except that I would enlarge his statement regarding "stories" to
include alternate structures. He was probably speaking in broader
terms than just narrative when he used "stories" but
at any rate, I would want students and nonfiction writers to be
encouraged to try many different modes, not just narrative. Storytelling
is only one way to tell the nonfiction truths of our lives.
There are also, of course, lyric modes; segmented, "follow
the brush" structures; the memoir; the profile; the travel
piece; the personal essay fueled by argument or voice; and any
number of hybrid forms. And this list just grazes the surface of
structures that can be used in literary nonfiction.
I also like Dinty's notion
of truth in nonfiction being related not only to getting the facts
straight--or as straight as any facts can be gotten--but also to
the "author's authentic thoughts." I
just read a book (which I almost didn't finish for reasons I will
only partially explain) that bothered me a great deal. I had no
problem with the facts of the story; they were, I was convinced,
highly researched and reliably accurate facts. However, I did not
trust the author's "take" on the events. Specifically,
I did not believe that the event she so scrupulously and accurately
described actually meant as much to her as she made it out to mean.
No one will take her to court on this charge. No one will scream, "you
lied" about facts, timeline etc. Still, something about the
book felt untrue to this reader; something kept saying to me that
the emotion felt trumped up. Maybe I didn't trust the author’s
motives. Or perhaps I am just too critical a reader. For whatever
reason, I do not consider her book an example of artful literary
nonfiction. Writers can get the facts right—and it goes without
saying that getting the fact right is an essential job of nonfiction
writers--and still miss the truth of the heart.
Another way to distinguish literary nonfiction
from non-literary nonfiction regards not so much the definition
of "finished" nonfiction--the
text itself, I mean, and what we might glean from that finished
text--but rather the process of that text's making. The process
of writing literary nonfiction is closer, I feel, to the process
of writing other forms of literary art (fiction, poetry, drama)
than it is to the process of writing traditional, academic, or
strictly journalistic forms of nonfiction. The literary nonfiction
writer often proceeds without knowing what she will discover or
what form the final work will take. Words are not just containers
into which she places her already conceived notions, plots, or
structures; words are her partners in the journey to discover the
pattern hiding within the facts. Writing begets more writing; meaning
grows on the page. So the literary nonfiction writer writes into
the question, into the mystery, and the writing process itself
is part of the journey.
*I prefer the term "literary nonfiction" to "creative
nonfiction" mostly because whenever my students, or readers,
talk to me about "creative nonfiction," they seem always
and only to focus on the truth/fact issue, while ignoring the hundreds
of other ways in which nonfiction can be creative/literary. Creative
becomes a synonym for invention; invention, as in, well I guess
I can make things up, right? I mean, I can be creative! Creativity,
to the nonfiction writer, does not consist in making things up
but rather in making things from.
Sue William Silverman:
Creative
nonfiction is a genre of writing that uses many devices associated
with fiction such as dialogue, plot, narrative arc, character
development, and setting to tell true stories. Increasingly,
CNF writers are drawing upon the imagistic power of poetry to
make their prose more immediate as well. By recognizing the impossibility
of being objective, CNF writers, nevertheless, bring to their
craft an examination of actual lived experience. Although some
critics have pointed to the “fudging” of facts (think James
Frey), these shortcomings of individual writers should not discredit
the whole genre. No one suggests that journalists should stop writing
because of frauds committed, for example, by Jayson Blair. And,
of course, to write CNF is to explore events metaphorically—not
just state the facts of them. CNF seeks to make the personal universal,
just as in poetry and fiction. In this sense, it is an equally
important art form.
Greg Bottoms:
Over
the last quarter century, as the din of contemporary life has become exponentially louder, there has been a steady increase
in, I’m going to say a Renaissance in, both interest
and output in the personal voice in literature and in what
has been called literary nonfiction, the fourth genre, narrative
nonfiction, the literature of reality, or, more plainly and
sometimes problematically, creative nonfiction. The genre
isn’t new. Artful journalistic narratives date back
at least to Daniel Defoe’s Journal of the Plague Years;
autobiographical meditation back to St. Augustine’s Confessions; literary,
expressionistic nature and science writing back to Robert Burton’s
The Anatomy of Melancholy and beyond, but some of the debates surrounding
it about “truth,” genre borders, and the prevalence
of confessional in our society seem to be. It is, I
think, a very good time to be an aspiring writer reading and
composing creative nonfiction. There is much to think
and talk about on both the textual and extra-textual level.
Subgenres of creative nonfiction include
memoir, personal essay, travel writing, nature writing, literary journalism, autobiographical
art and cultural criticism, as well as more experimental forms
such as the lyric essay and the nonfiction short shorts. And,
of course, there is cross-breeding and gray area between and
across these subgenres; for instance, some works may well be both
lyric essay and travel piece, short short and nature essay,
memoir and cultural criticism, personal essay and literary journalism).
What all creative nonfiction has in common
is a life beyond information and
mere facts, an intention to tell the truth (understanding that that
is not as easy as one might assume), a poetic attention to language,
and an aspiration to be art. It goes deeper into human
experience than a newspaper report or essayistic radio commentary
or special-needs confessional or dashed-off arts review ever
tries to do (there is a place and audience for these things--me, for
one--but they are not, it is important to understand, creative nonfiction). Such
work belongs, because of its artistry, seriousness, humanity, and intelligence,
on the same shelf as fine poetry, novels, short stories, and
plays.
Patricia Foster (excerpted
from an essay called “Sideswiped”):
It’s been said that trauma is often the engine for memoir.
But what exactly is trauma? Is it any bad thing that happens to
you – the shrieking siren of the ambulance, the suffocating
humiliation of desertion, divorce, the sudden downsizing of your
coveted job?
No. Not necessarily.
Trauma, according to critic Cathy Carruth, is the response to an
unexpected or overwhelming violent event or events that are not
fully grasped as they occur but return later in repeated flashbacks,
nightmares and other repetitive phenomena ( 11). The crux here
is repetition and incomprehensibility. What makes trauma trauma
is the coming back to the “not knowing,” the sense
that the event takes place too soon, too suddenly, “too unexpectedly
to be fully grasped by consciousness” (4). It’s a lurching,
drifting process, a “break,” Carruth says, “in
the mind’s experience of time.” You aren’t expecting
it, can’t see it coming, and recall only its exaggerated
symptoms or miscellaneous consequences. Because the traumatic experience
can’t be assimilated, can’t be fully known, it sneaks
back with all its pinches and bruises, following a rather predictable
cycle of forgetting and return. The plot is the gap between knowing
and not knowing, a stick sharpened to prod you again and again.
Or perhaps it’s a double plot: knowing and not knowing as
it oscillates between death and survival, the “story of the
unbearable nature of an event and the story of the unbearable nature
of its survival” (6).
But how do you write such a plot? What structure, what point of
view can you possibly use? In fact, how do you find a point of
view when after trauma you often don’t know where to turn,
don’t know how to see things, don’t even have a position
from which to see?
Narrative structure seems to depend on your model of selfhood and
how that self makes sense of the past. One model – the archeologist
conceit -- suggests the metaphor of excavation: dig deep enough
and the past can be rediscovered by the remembering subject who,
through extensive work, excavates the secret buried in the psyche
and -- wah-la!-- the root of the trauma is revealed: the illegitimate
birth, the generational incest, the prolonged exposure to violent
death.
A second model favors the metaphor of layering, implying that awareness
is a continuous and provisional process, snapshots of past and
present selves overlapping in a kind of collage that reveals not
tunneling deeper and deeper toward awareness but the repetitive
shock of dislocation. In this case, structure might mimic the symptomatology
of traumatic events at the formal level, which means such books
are thick with repetitive re-enactments and interruptions, the
point of view frequently shifting. Such narratives tend to have
no epiphany, to skew chronology, to be circular and paradoxical,
subverting linear plot.
Or to be more specific, writers who mimic the symptoms of trauma
often use fragmentation, repetition, and disruptive chronology,
insisting on circling rather than progression, process rather than
epiphany.
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